It was a cool dry evening; the kind which made me feel I could walk for miles in it: but I had a bus to catch.
A spider collected its day's victims on the bus stop pole as I waited for my ride to draw into view.
Alighting, I took my usual seat, finding it to be the only one without a functioning overhead strip fluorescent; the mild seclusion of the half-light suited me.
As the bus drove nearer town, the late evening traffic slowed us to a crawl, softening every bump in the road to a gentle rock. At this speed I was free to people-watch, to pry into a second of their lives unbeknownst to them.
When I finally arrived at my stop, I uttered a soft 'thank you' to the driver before stepping out into the faintest drizzle of rain. I wove through homeward bound city workers to pass beneath the bridge
over which a departing train was piping and clattering; the sound secretly thrilled me.
Once clear of the bridge, the drizzle began to cling to my hair in beads, reflecting the orange glow of the streetlights as I climbed the hill. In a small side- street, the glare and chaos of the main road began to fade, leaving me to trudge through shadows alone until I reached my destination.
Distantly, the hollow screech and whistle of the trains below was still audible, but that was all.
this seems like a great opening to a story :) i could picture this in my head pefectely
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